Just start to read – I want to plant a seed – no time to stop and think we’re going full speed – one simple aim, progress, proceed – forget what you want, forget what you need – we’re doing good so far true indeed – we’ve got to keep it up, can’t stop to feed – just stay focussed, follow my lead – keep an orderly line we don’t want a stampede – people will get hurt, they’ll bruise, they’ll bleed – don’t be selfish there’s no place for greed – just follow the path, I beg, I plead – I know what I say, so when I speak take heed – we can do this together, on that we’re agreed – we have to love one another if we are to succeed – we’ve done it my friends, we’ve arrived, we’re freed.
http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2011/09/poem-of-week-saturday.html
…and I find myself amazed
all this creativity has me dazed
This award means a lot
Though I act like I’m unfazed
I would like to nominate Acoustic3
Respect and Acceptance 
Loving the work – it’s awesome. What a talent!
Thanks a lot for taking the time to read, appreciate your feedback
This is really great stuff!! Keep it comming!
Glad you like, thanks a lot
What a great poem for children. I’m loving the way you have written it and the subject matter – excellent stuff!
thank you, I really appreciate the comments
This is my favourite, I really like it. Very emotive. Seriously good stuff.
Thanks a lot, always grateful when someone takes the time to read and leave feedback, keep an eye out for updates.
Good work. It’s been said above already, but keep it coming!
Great to read by both children and adults alike, it’s the sort of values we try to instill with the young but packaged in an accessible blend of rhyme and rhythm : )
this is a really really good poem i like the part especially where you said ” we have to love one another if we are to succeed – we’ve done it my friends, we’ve arrived, we’re freed” keep up the good work.
Very well written, excellent content and message – can’t wait to read your next group of poems! When are you going to post some more?
freed but still waiting freedom.
i like,,,!!!
Wonderful poem. I like it!
My entry this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/blood-on-the-moon-2/
This is such good work keep it coming looking forward to reading more
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/
freedom is like food, we always want more.
superb message.
That’s great ! loved the ending rhymes and sounds like a song
You are the poet of this week in jingle poetry 🙂
brilliant! well chosen by G Garden as the poem of the wk. all the best 🙂
congrats on the award!